crematorium
curtain falls
final performance
curtain falls
final performance
BIO: Currently back living with her family in her native Northern Ireland after thirteen years studying and working in France and England, Marion has had poetry and fiction published online and in print and non-fiction published in the UK trade press. She began studying and writing senyru and haiku two years ago and has become passionate about the form.
wow! love that one, Marion!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteI love the fact you have threaded the themes of the curtain being something that is a physical one that falls on coffins and the metaphorical one that falls on the last performance of life.
ReplyDeleteHow you did that and created a sense of falling darkness in a few words I don't know. Some feat indeed.
Yes, that final curtain, dropping on that stage we call Life..Echoes of Shakespeare here, Marion..Beautifully written...
ReplyDeleteIndeed, it is the final performance, and a hot act, at that. Well done, Marion.
ReplyDeleteI've just seen all these lovely comments eight months after the event! Thanks folks.
ReplyDeletemarion
Hi Marion
ReplyDeleteThis gave me the chills
As when I die I would like to be cremated.
I love it all the same
Your senyru also photo